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She watched them as they moved down her street.
They never saw her, took great care in looking away before she noticed their shamelessly wide eyes were glued to her body... or, more importantly what she embodied: this world they lived in wasn't perfect.
Her presence there seemed to pollute their pretty city and just like the odd beer can or stray McDonalds bag, they ignored her. She wasn't stupid though... she knew she was just as much an ornament as the ribbons that decorated the streetlights at this time of year, that she in fact blended in with the rest of the pavement and she herself was just an odd discoloration to be considered very briefly before they all walked on... she didn't care.

Christmas.
Stupid time of year, Christmas... all these tiny little pests would assault her unsuspecting eardrums with their so called "angelic" voices, praising the birth of someone she had never believed in. She knew how many were born per minute, also knew how many would die per minute... surviving deserved praise. Being born was just the beginning. She didn't actually know why those things were so clear to her now... when she was younger, she had sung those horrible Christmas carols herself, she'd filled her stocking and told her mommy and daddy to leave extra cookies for Santa and his reindeers and indeed, she had thought it pure magic when her stocking was filled and the cookies appeared eaten.
Maybe that was it: the fireplace the hung her stocking over was gone, mommy was gone, daddy was gone and the cookies had lost their initial value by making every source of food purely necessary, eliminating the pleasure that used to come with it... and just how did she come by her food?

Well... she stole it.
Not like they would miss it. They had more at home.

At home...

She was homeless.
Yeah, they didn't have to remind her by flashing their stupid cell phones at her... some idiots actually couldn't even put their laptops down and thought it perfectly logical to cross a busy city street with it dangeling unsafe and totally exposed on one hand.
Two out of three got mugged.
Not her. Not her fault or problem. Of course she smiled when that happened. Hell yeah, she did... something about watching people lose what they had comforted her: perhaps, that happened to other people too.

She snapped out of her musings when another hyperactive eight year old passed her whilst nagging about the toy he hoped Santa would deliver... fancy thing: Artificial intelligence, robotics, lots of cash. Lots and lots of cash. He'd have to have been real good this year to get that kind of reward...
Envy was one of the seven deadly sins.
So was greed.
Sloth was, too: to be apathic and joyless or to fail to utilize the full extent of one's given gift.
And Gluttony: the over-indulgence or over-consumption of anything to the point of waste... try earth.
Wrath: the anger inside that went beyond one's control... feelings of hatred cherished inside one's soul.
Lust: ah, lust. Middle aged men versus the main inhabitants of the red light district, maybe?
Finally, there was Pride: those who felt the need to be more important than others all the time were sinners too.
That's how she saw the seven deadly sins: Wrath, Sloth and Envy fit her like a glove as Gluttony and Pride did all the passers-by... they didn't showcase it in an extreme way but they didn't help her either... too proud, probably. That's why those sins fit them so well...

But of course her view was twisted... she understood that. She was pretty sure God did, too. No hard feelings?

She once saw charity commercial about starving people needing cash: Yeah, they did, they deserved to be happy and healthy and frollicing around with happy children and a promise of generations to come and litres and litres of water to drink and play in.
Everybody does.

So where was her text number? Where was the one of the eerie looking Junkie across the street that always went to get his fix at three 'o clock at night?

She wasn't starving, she wasn't getting hit all that much unless her addicted neighbor himself with the thought she had actual money on her... she was freezing.

Rattling bones, clattering teeth, limbs turning a delightful shade of blue on their own accord... freezing.

She suspected she might have fallen ill the night before, when it snowed...
It didn't matter though.

Her name was simply D... she didn't care for much, she was fourteen years old and her bright green eyes had fallen shut behind her damp, dirty black hair... Everyone was blind.
Accept maybe that one guy who lived across the street and had been making a futile effort to shoo the Junkie guy off his porch because one day, he looked outside and... saw.

He saw!

And he purposefully crossed the busy city street of Pride and Gluttony and nudged her... made her a touchable object again, instead of this ghost that haunted his neighbourhood:

'You shouldn't be outside, kid.' He smiled.
'You... you can see me?' Lame thing to say, but she couldn't hide her surprise.
He felt her forehead and found fever, shaking his head, thus making salt and pepper colored hair dance on his forehead.
'Yeah, I see you.' His voice was softer now.
She remembered him vaguely from some goods he'd offered earlier: blankets, food, actual shelter when it was cold outside... she'd always declined: he wanted to help her? Text it.

'I'll leave, sir. I'll go if that's what you want.' she tried to stand up, some degree of fear radiating from her eyes...
'No. Don't leave. I'm just trying to help, you know? You're sick.'
'I'm fine.'
'I bet you are.'
The man picked her up and carried her into his house, despite her protests...

His bed was nice...
'What's that?' He asked, fingers hovering over a scar on her right cheek.
'Nothing...'
He let it go.
'I'm Lawrence.' He declared.
Something about him made D abandon her usual "Good for you." and instead respond with: 'I'm D. Why are you doing this, Lawrence?'
'I care. You don't deserve this. You can be somebody.'
'How do you know that?'
'I can see it in your eyes... you hate this, you're not accepting it... you're awake, I guess... and intelligent... like my neice.'
'What happened to her?'
'Drugs...' His shoulders fell.
'I'm clean, you know?' Then D gave herself a once over. 'Sort of.'
'We'll fix that later... now sleep.'

She did.
She had no idea whether she'd be safe... but warmth was everything.

I am indeed new to this spot... I'm fifteen and see my writing as my only talent, therefore I am intent on becoming an author when I grow up. This is my first original story... I'm rather unsure about it but I want, no, need to improve so I posted it here and I'm hoping for some advanced critique to help me get better. So... yeah.
posted by joe-edwardfan
Black moon
Edward left me. edward left me. I couldn’t cope with it how could he leave me? he loved me didn’t he? I was subbing so hard that I couldn’t breath I was picturing his hard emotionless face when he told me he never loved me or wanted me every time I thought about him I subbed harder, my hole body was shaking, it was raining and my hole body was wet I was freezing but I didn’t care I rather die than live without him.im crazy the guy left me and I don’t want to live without him!
My body was freezing and my head was about to explode when I heard someone calling my name
-Bella,Bella,Bella….....
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Hannah met Jamie in the summer of 2004.It was Hannah's 21st birthday and she and her friends went to a club.They wanted to dance,but they didn't like the music so Hannah went to speak to the DJ."This music is awful,",she said."Could you play something else?"The DJ looked at her and said,"Don't worry,I have the perfect song for you."

2 minutes later he said:''The next song is by Coldplay.It's called Yellow and it's for a beautiful girl who's dancing over there."Hannah knew that the song was for her because she was wearing a yellow dress.When Hannah and her friends left the club,the DJ was waiting...
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posted by cassie-1-2-3
Spelling is important.
Grammar is important.
Especially when involving words…

In today’s world, written word is growing more and more common. With the fairly recent introduction of text messaging, email, IM services, social networks, and online self publishing (which is what we’re all doing here on Fanpop when we post articles, and what I am mainly addressing), it is not only important how your words sound, it’s just as important, if not more so, how they look.

link* to me, some people seem to believe that spelling and grammar is not at all important in these self publications.
Just to list...
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I went back into the steamy kitchen. Chefs everywhere making different kinds of hamburgers. What am I doing in the hot kitchen? I'm grabbing plates of food. I'm a waitress at Reynolds Diner, a retro 50's diner. It's very popular, and always is busy. . . Like right now! It was hard getting this job, seeing as you have to be people friendly, make sure not to spill the food, and having a good memory.
"Excuse me miss, can I have a refill of Coke?" A lady asked me. I nodded my head, and smiled at her.
It was nice working here, seeing as I get paid a nice amount of money, and see a celebrity or a few....
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Chapter Three: "Dark Destiny"

Some time later, after almost everyone has returned to school after break…

A young man and an older man sat across from one another in the comfortable back of a long black limousine, the world rolling by unheeded beyond the darkly tinted glass. It was daylight outside, meaning they would rather be sleeping than traveling about, but they had much to do and were not wasting any time. Despite the apparent age difference between the two vampires, it was the younger one who obviously was the figure of greatest power, which was apparent from the way the older one addressed...
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Stars twinkled and glittered in the night sky, they were numerous, infinite maybe. They were so beautiful, dazzling; sweet delicious candy for my eyes. I was just absolutely mesmerized; I didn’t get times like this often. Not a single cloud in sight or skyscraper to hurt this scene of nature. Just pure bliss, no other words could describe it. I wished my days were always like this, peaceful, filled with joy and happiness but hey one like me could only wish. It was all because of him.

“Hey there you are.” My ears twitch, it was him. Great, I just had to push my luck and now he’s here....
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posted by ZekiYuro
It's offical-British children are getting fatter.According to a survey published in the British Medical Journal in 2001,nearly 16 per cent of two-year-olds are overweight and more than 20 per cent of four-year-olds are overweight.And since 2001,the problem has got worse.The government's latest health survey found out that today about 30 per cent of al children are overweight.

WHY?
Children watch too much television,and they see ten food advertisements for every hour of TV they watch.They do less excersise,play less sport,and spend more time watching videos or playing computer games than they...
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posted by morganaforever
This is only the prologue of my fantasy story. All about revenge, betrayal, love, hate and choices that change the course of the future. Three men competiting for the throne of Asaia and a vengeful and ambitious lady out to avenge a death. Who will win?

Ashmore shifted in her sleep. She dreamt of a time when she soared through the skies, worshipped by the weak two- legged species called humans. Every summer, tributes would be given to her and her kin; for they were the firstborn on the earth; born from the volcanoes created and destroyed by the seven gods themselves. Humans were merely an accident;...
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(WARINING: The views expressed in this article are of one person and on person alone's opinion, unless more readers agree, and I highly doubt that, please do not comment to harshly as this is JUST an Opinion.)

I'm a SHINee fan.

I'm aware that it's near close to impossible to be with one of them.

But I still love them like any fangirl would.

And, I will admit, I'm selfish when it comes to the subject.

I Love them with all my heart, not that I'm quiet sure there was any to give or to begin with for that matter. At first, I didn't like them, but as I got more and more into asian influenced things,...
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posted by DxCFan123
I stood up. My ankle was better. Where am I? I looked around. I was in a tighter dress and it was longer, down to my ankles. Blood and holes no longer covered it. Where could I find information? The library! I ran to the nearest person I could find. "Where is the library?" They looked at me like I was a tourist. " Go down until the end of the next block. Then turn right and keep going until you get to a temple like building." "Thank you!" I said.

I ran all the way there. I ran inside. "M'aam, what date is it today?" I asked. "It is Sunday, November 8th, 2007. Why?" I stared and her with disbelievemEt....
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posted by TivaRocks
For NCIS & Ziva centric fans only. Or for people who wants to read some crap >.<


Its hard keeping up long distance relationships, but it’s almost impossible to keep up a very large friendship group when they were all split up in different parts of the world, and no one knew that better then the Ace Gang.
Ziva David, Tali David, Ali David, Ari Haswari, Natasha Haswari, Shmuel Rubinstein, Abraham Cole, Aaron Spike, Lauralie Gilmore, Christopher Hayden, Michael Rivkin, Zachery David-Addy, Ryan James, Ashley James, Chad Cooper, Sandra Long, Sam Long, Oliver Todd and Shina Coholan all...
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Chapter One

Lily knew that her seventh and final year at Hogwarts was going to be the hardest yet. Not only was she just getting over the death of her parents in early March, but she had the N.E.W.T's coming up – and to add to all the stress of it, she had been chosen as Head Girl. She had tried to decline the position, politely of course, but Professor Dumbledore would hear nothing of it. The phrase he used in his last letter still made her smile when she thought of it: ”There is no other girl in the seventh year that I would entrust this position to, due to certain special circumstances...
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posted by lindizzle215
hi so im a new writer so please tell me if i should contine writing this story. Please comment!!!!!
Rated: M


Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to the family camp that we help with every year and went here when we were kid’s but know were all teenagers so were counselors now. My brother Joey and I drive together every year and all of our other brothers drive up in there own cars or the young ones with the others. There was a new guy this year his name is Eddie. I think that I will like this kid as I get to know him. I don’t have to share a room because I am the only girl...
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posted by Authorfiction
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Chapter 1
THE SPOILED PRINCE

    In the land of Mayfair, lived a king by the name of Alfred and his wife, Queen Jasline. King Alfred and Queen Jasline had two children, the oldest Prince Harry and his younger sister, Princess Cilla.
    Prince Harry was a very happy little prince because you see Harry was very spoiled and rotten. Nobody, absolutely nobody was allowed to say ‘no’ to Prince Harry when he wanted something, or to punish him when he did something wrong or even to criticize him. Whatever Harry wanted to have, Harry had and whatever Harry wanted...
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"Leonardo"aka Leo the Emo :]"
"Leonardo"aka Leo the Emo :]"
Ugh,I knew today was going to be terrible but seriously,does she have to completely suck his whole face like that.I wasn't talking about Lulu and Joel,luckily music was the only class I didn't have those two lovers.No,I was talking about my friend Abby totally lipping her boyfriend Gabe's face off.It was completely sickening.Our retarded teacher never looked back so they spent the whole forty-five minutes in class sucking faces.Juan had the same look I did,the look that make the whole school know that I drank rotten milk or something.A look that would make the janitors get a raise for their...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Belinda’s p.o.v

I heard unsettling laughter, I turned my head to what I expected to be Justin, but no instead I saw Millie sitting beside me with vodka in her hand. She smiled once she noticed I was awake. “Hey there sleepy head” She said, I looked around and saw that we were in Justin’s shed but the buckles that were once around my wrist and ankles had been undone. “I thought I might just go ahead and undo those considering they were pretty tight” She said before taking a sip of her vodka. I closed my eyes and look down, the whole where Justin has stabbed me was gone. “How did...
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posted by lollipopszx3
PG13. I don't like this chapter... Kind of rushed.

Chapter 3

It has been a week since my detention, and the arrival of Megan. Jake hasn't been more happy, now that he had a girlfriend. Brianna and Lilia have been on me more than ever now. They don't know when or how to stop. I was getting really annoyed.

I walked into the school, looking quite pissed. As usual all the girls came and told me how great I looked, although I knew that I look like crap.

"Yo Joshua... Why the crappy mad face?" asked Ken. He was never subtle.

"Nothing. Fuck you and leave me alone." I told him.

"Eww.... I don't want it...
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Alec’s eyes opened as the day has started, he sitting up on his bed, remembering yesterday, how Grito basically gave them permission, no, forced them to create his group. Alec picked up the phone and gave Marley a call. He discussed what happened yesterday and if they should agree with Grito, Marley agreed, he hated the fact that innocent people were getting killed so he was glad to help. Marley informed Opal and she had the same idea. After he hanged up Alec got the phone book out and looked for the name ‘Norris’. After a few phone calls he reached her and explained the same thing. They...
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She stepped into the flat sorely, gazing at his stuff. He’s left so soon, without saying he would do so, without mentioning any goodbyes with his deep, sad voice. Everything was the same, nothing has been moved, and nothing has been replaced. He took nothing with him but his endless tears. He took nothing with him but his sadness and misery. He took nothing … but the shattering hearts with its deep wounds.
She did fool him with her sweet words and enchanting look, but she’s never thought that such a smart person like him can’t be fooled with her stupid words. Her words did nothing but...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

Finally Saturday came. Friday had dragged on forever, in opinion.

I'd been half there on Thursday after he'd asked me out, and as soon as I got home, I called Tia, and it might have been me, but I was sure she sounded smug. We started planning what I was going to wear, and we even made plans to go shopping on Friday after school.

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My dad had left my mom and I when I was barely two years old. My mom had had me when she was nineteen, she still had that faded prettiness. I was told I looked like her, but I'm not sure that's true. My mom was...
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