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posted by lindizzle215
hi so im a new writer so please tell me if i should contine writing this story. Please comment!!!!!
Rated: M


Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to the family camp that we help with every year and went here when we were kid’s but know were all teenagers so were counselors now. My brother Joey and I drive together every year and all of our other brothers drive up in there own cars or the young ones with the others. There was a new guy this year his name is Eddie. I think that I will like this kid as I get to know him. I don’t have to share a room because I am the only girl counselor. Oh I forgot to tell you that my name is Cameron but every on calls me Cam. After a good night of sleep I was sitting at the beach. When Eddie came and sat down next to me.
“Hi I’m Eddie”
“Hey I’m Cam… nice to meet you.” I replied.
Eddie and I talked all afternoon about each other and Eddie told me his power and why he is here at our camp. His father is Apollo the Greek god of light, medicine and music. His power Is healing like one of mine powers but I use water to heal or hurt. Eddies here because his dad wanted him to train with other of his kind other then his siblings and he is on probation so his probation officer thinks this will be a good camp for him to learn and grow at. We talked about our favorite things, food, colors, friends, family, weapons, past relations and other things.
Then Eddie and I moved closer to each other.
I looked in to his deep chocolate brown eyes thinking I could get lost in them. When he kissed me, we were all over each other then I remembered that we were on the beach. I got up quickly and grabbed Eddie's hand and we ran to my room where we both knew that no one would be but us. I unlocked the door and kissed Eddie. While we were kissing we moved to my bed and I was taking my top off but Eddie stopped me and told me no. But I didn’t get it so I asked him if he wanted to take my shirt off but again I got a “no”. Eddie said “Lets just keep doing this before we go and do anything that we regrette.” and I agreed with him I mean I didn’t really know him for that long. So we had a huge make out session.
“Its time for dinner Cam” Eddie said
“ok” I said
So we walked to dinner together hand in hand. When we walked in the dining hall everyone was watching us, and I mean WATCHING US. All the boys were so pissed and coinciding most of them were my family we were in deep shit. The looks on my brother’s faces could kill. And all the girls looked they wanted to eat my head for dinner. And I gave my brothers and cousins a look that said “be nice or I swear you will not be getting any this summer”. So we walked over and sat down and they were all very nice to Eddie. (Thank god)
Eddie went back to his room to get some clothes because he was staying with me tonight. I was sitting in my room thinking about how hot Eddie was, his hot six pack, the whole v thing going on down there, (god that’s a turn on) his sexy dirty blond hair. Then the devil himself walked in, in his swim suit (which looked way to hot).
E: “Hey baby”
L: “Hi babe”
E: “Midnight swim?”
L: “With you of course”
I got changed in to my Black bathing suit with the piece signs on it, and went out to meet Eddie on the Beach. He was already in the water so I went behind him and grabbed his leg. It scarred the shit out of him hehe. Eddie turned and grabbed me and planted a light kiss on my lips, which of course turned out to become a passionate kiss and when we pulled a part Eddie had my top off. I had my legs wrapped around his waist so I felt the bulge in his shorts. But I was to distracted sucking and nibbling on his neck to notice that Eddie was carry me to my room. Eddie opened the door and layed me on the bed, and kissed me. I reached down and slid my hand down his shorts with out breaking the kiss. Eddie groaned in my mouth as my hand slid up and down his shaft, he untied one side of my bottoms. Right as he was getting ready to untie the other side of my bottoms…………….
Cam's Biniki top
Cam's Biniki top
cam's Biniki bottom
cam's Biniki bottom
Eddie's boardshorts
Eddie's boardshorts
January 16, 1815

Journal,
    We have gotten fortunate, Journal! Nastea has found coats in the broken down train. She sits by Sasha now, covering her in them. And she took one for herself as well. I can see color returning to Sasha’s cheeks. Nastea coughs harshly, shivering nervously. Her toes are turning blue, and one has already fallen off. We slept in the train last night, getting as much warmth as we could. We have to start to move tomorrow, find shelter. The berries Nastea fed Sasha seem to have made Sasha a lot sicker than she was before. She’s coughing up blood now. The snow around her is stained with red and pink. I attempted to make a fire earlier, and let me tell you journal, it didn’t work out. It’s much to cold to start flames. For every time the fire ignites, it extinguishes, the harsh winds blowing it out. I’m losing my teeth, journal. Nastea can’t talk anymore, and her and Sasha’s hair is mostly gone. Journal, what’s happening to us?
    Bye Journal,
        Nadia
posted by Charlieminster
“Uh, Monday mornings” Ellie groaned. She got out of bed slowly and looked at the clock, 10 o’clock, she had half an hour to get dressed and walk across campus to her first lecture of the day. Ellie put on her favorite pair of gray skinny jeans, a black t-shirt with I love reading gothic books written on it, a pair of red all star converse and a bag to match. When she walked pass the breakfast bar she picked up her English and History book and her pencil case and put them in to her bag with her purse and phone.
        The Ellie made her way across...
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posted by kitsine
The Pookie

The pookie fell from a tree
upon hitting the ground he farted
scared at his own flatulence he tried climbing up the tree. But for every branch he grabbed he tooted. and for every twig he broke, he farted.

farting all the way up, pookie climed that tree. He had to make it to the top you see, cause that where pookie's make pee. Relief was almost in reach for pookie. till a stiring occurred within.. a rumbling sensation, and pookie knew.. with a tear, that he couldn't hold it in.

Till this day those who were near said it sounded like a cow mooing. The momentum of his farts became like a rocket and shot pookie up and out that tree! Up in to the sky..till pookie could not be seen.

moral of story? dont eat beans. O_o

next chapter "The pookie Returns"
posted by juicyjossy9
Think
See
Remember

If we compare the world with a village of 100 inhabitants, taking into account all components, the village would look like this:

♥ 57 Asians – 21 Europeans
♥ 14 Americans – 8 Africans
♥ 52 women – 48 men
♥ 70 coloured people – 30 white
♥ 70 non-Christians – 30 Christians
♥ 89 straights – 11 homosexuals
♥ 6 people would possess 59% of the total global wealth
♥ 6 people would have U.S. citizenship
♥ 80 would be homeless
♥ 70 would be illiterate
♥ 50 would be dependent on someone else
♥ 1 would be dying
♥ 2 would be born
♥ 1 would have a PC
♥ 1 would...
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posted by hannah_vampire
Thanks for the comments plz keep reading and commenting :)

Nothing more then a visual whisper, like a ghost, slipping past not to be seen.I stood still feet planted on the ground and hoping I would be as peacefully As I could and not be scared of what may lie ahead. I could see the fierce Fire dieing in peoples eyes and I was hoping that the fire would not fully die in mine.

I walked through the forest as I stopped to see the most beautiful animal before me A real wolf fully black with a white star shape on its right front paw and it was so Sleek and beautiful. I saw a girl running towards me...
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posted by Charlieminster
left front clockwise: Charlie,Alice,Hollie,Connor and Jon
left front clockwise: Charlie,Alice,Hollie,Connor and Jon
Charlie walked over to the in front Mrs. Dale's Desk and sat down.
"Charlotte,you haven't got anything to worry about this isn't for anything bad." said Mrs.Dale
"okay" said Charlie "What is it about then?"
"Your father,sister and myself recived a phone call today from a lady called Miss. Fairchild who is from the school of special skills and she believe that this school would help you contorl your power." Mrs.Dale explained "The school is in Index, Washington state. There are six kids your age going and they all have special power as well. The semester begins this week end. Do you want to go...
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posted by harrypotterbest
The newspaper I my hand was already rolled in a tight ball. I biked as fast as I could toward my best friend Maisi’s house. I had already told her I was coming, but not why.
The reason I was going was infuriating, mysterious, and suspicious. How and why someone would do such a thing was a mystery. As Maisi’s house came into view, I hopped of my bike and put it in their bike chain. I ran up the steps and rang the doorbell continuously. Maisi opened it and ushered me inside. We both went up to her room.
She shut the door. ‘Okay,’ she said. ‘Out with it. What’s the matter? You look...
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posted by booklover13
Heres the summary the novel I recently finished writing. I'm not great at writing summaries, but i tried :) Please comment!!!

Its placed in older times, with magic and stuff like that, just fyi!




Ash and Anna are two ordinary girls, living two seperate lives in a world where magic is abundant. But when their prophecy brings the twin sisters together, and they learn that they have a long-lost triplet brother, kidnapped at birth, their worlds are turned upside-down, and every choice they make will affect the fate of the entire world.

When the two girls learn of their exceptional magical ablities,...
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posted by Hime666
This is a story of SAW and in this story Billy (AKA Jigsaw) is a human^^

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As Billy was walking in the abonded house.He sighs as he realises how long he had been alone.He walks in the room where John was right now making plans for new traps. "Hey John?"He asked and walked up to him. "Yes,Billy?"John asks. "Is there...Anyone who have came in here?"Billy asks hopefully. "no sorry.."Joh says and continues making the trap plans. "Oh...I didnt have anything else to say..."Billy says and walks out of John's...
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posted by starwarsfangirl
This is another piece of a story I've been writing...
If you've read the other part, this has absolutely nothing to do with Drew. NOTHING.
This takes place in a mythical and magical country known as Dragomria.
Please review!

Light hadn’t even graced the towers of the palace in the capitol city of Dragomria as the scribe rushed through the grand corridors. He burst into the throne room.
“Your Majesties! Prince Berthold has chosen a bride!” He said, gasping for air. Queen Callidora stood, her bright red hair cascading down to her waist, her brilliant green eyes cutting like a knife through...
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posted by hannah_vampire
Sorry that this took so long I hope you like it, I was busy so sorry :)

Dear diary,

I wish that I was someone else, All the drama was giving me a headache and
I can’t think on what was important. I need some where to go, Blair was still
In the hospital and I guess I could go there I mean with no distractions.
Bye


I couldn’t open the front door, I ran around to the back door and I was lucky
That the key was still hidden in the crack of the bricks. I sat on my bed and closed
My eyes, finally some peace and I can think straight now.

I heard the creak of my door and opened my eyes, ‘Do you ever...
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I wondered if my dad knew where I was. I wondered if he cared. A father should care if his daughter spends the night at some guys house, shouldn't he? A father should do a lot of things that mine doesn't do. On the upside, he's probably out buying Cleetus a big old bone. Woohoo.
I looked up into Ethan's eyes and tried to meet his gaze. The way the shimmered made me feel like my eyes were the dullest thing on earth. Annabella liked this guy and I knew I was wrong to be this close to him. I promised her I would not get too close to him, but I almost kissed him. Almost, the key word.
I stayed...
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posted by inexplicable
It was my turn re-one time far too late.
The dress rehearsal already had started a quarter hour ago and I arrived panting and completely breathless in the test room.
yes, you are, finite since Daniela, our rehearsing leader, shouted to me, ".
> > excuse me, I could not get away from the musicschool earlier<<, I answered still struggling for breath.

Yes, if there was something I really loved, then it was the theater and the music.
Unfortunately, I did not manage to get both things under a hat here so that I paint,
it was late there. The dress rehearsal proceeded despite my late arrival...
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Chapter 1
Negative stranger


“Have a backbone . . . wait, your an arthropod.”

    


The sun was burning my eyes as the world spun around me. When I opened them, my eyes burned and then i thought I heard a sizzle, which, of course, was my imagination. I could feel the burning sensation on my upper arm from the shot last night. Crazy. The sunny burn kept burning my pupils until I opened my eyes fully. Then I notice that it’s just my light in my room.
Bummer.
    I sat up and rubbed the sore spot on my upper arm area. Shots hurt more than you think. When...
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Okay, so.... hi! My name is Serenna and I'm a huge fan of Kingdom Hearts! ^_^ I've been writing for years now and I've made lots of different KH fanfics so here's one of'em! Hope you all like it!:)

Summary: In Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories, after Riku defeated Ansem, he said he would someday return. And now he's back. But what is Ansem after? And who is this new, mysterious, strong girl?

~1. The Run

I jumped a good ten feet in the air, arriving softly in the dense forestry. I looked behind me, checking to make sure the shadows weren't following me anymore. I'd been running non-stop for a good...
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so...her it goes:P

Actors:~Ecem
~Sari
~selen
~sara
~rumeysa
~sevde
~sevde
~dursun
~sufian
~firas
~roberto
~alex
~anthony
...
Scene starts off in class,the first day at school,everybody looking tired,waiting for they're form teacher to be presented.
(a moment of silence as the door slowly opens...I'll be helping on that one!...and a creepy looking teacher steps inside the class-room)
(ACT 1)
Radu:(low and dark voice) Hello....everybody Im your new teacher as we all~~

Alex: yeah,yeah we know,we know

Radu:(laughs sinisterly)you'd wished you didnt say that.NOW...you've been..."disrespectful" to the teacher,come outside...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
when i just have been through the worse in my life
my eyes turn black,my skin turns white
i'll be like a ghost
life has been sucked right from me
i feel my skin tearing apart like it's going to shred
i'm shaking and lonely and cold
but it's funny that my only savior is just a little sharp metal thing
just a small razor can heal me that much?!
better than anybody i have ever known
i slide my left arm just a little as a start and i feel like i need more and more and more...
until i can not get enough
but then i feel so good,almost satisfied
watching my blood spilling on the floor,drop after drop very slowly
that's just the hottest painful pleasure i have ever experienced
i feel so unbalanced,so numb
i don't know if i need someone to touch me or to shoot me to know that i'm still alive
but i know i won't stop
i'll cut myself and fuck the wound
i'll lick my blood for all my pain
posted by Flana_2
    “Do you realy think we’ll catch a shooting star with all the lights”?
        “Sure we will” Gina said, “I hope”. I was laughing at her when she called out, “Make a wish”! I turned to a long, pink faded.
        “Like I didn’t see that coming”!    
My mom came outside.
     “Gina, your mom is waiting out front” Her smile came back.” At least we saw something”!! She trough her messenger bag over her shoulder. I smiled...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
25: Freewill

They walked up the metal staircase, stepping on a solid metal platform that extended from one wall to the next. This room was much brighter, lit by dozens of lights, one area tucked away in a corner was nearly blanketed in darkness. Jack walked half-way across it before he stopped and looked down. “What is this?” she asked though she suspected she knew the answer.
“It’s where the magic happens.” She looked down, several people in white lab coats walked around two people on separate hospital beds, they were motionless and were hooked up to life support systems. They moved...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
23: Run to the Hills

IT had caught the right trail, was following it again, swiftly passing into Indiana, Ohio followed minutes later. Yes, IT was getting closer to what master wanted-and this time nothing would stop IT.
Nothing.
Already the carriage had passed into West Virginia, Tristan and Jack were both tense as to what was waiting at home, though they hid it from Rosalie as well as they could. “Are you sure you don’t need to hunt?” Jack asked her for the billionth time.
She sighed but smiled. “I’m sure. The day I found you again we had hunted.” She made a face as she said...
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