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A car crash, could my parents be that careless that I can’t even get a ride home from the hospital without getting in another life threatening situation? Could they care so little about my safety and well being that they’d almost kill me again? “I CAN’T DO THIS ANYMORE!” I hear I boys’ voice shout stridently. It was Matt, “I can’t just be your guardian angel! I have to be with you forever now! Why can’t you stay out of trouble Elizzy?” No one’s ever called me that before, not my parents, babysitters, friends, or even crazy old people…I like it! “Is that why you abandoned me for two years?” My voice was cracking, like it always does when I’m disappointed, enraged, or upset, I’m not the most talented actor, I can’t hide things, and if I try to I burst out crying. He didn’t want to be with me? Was he forced to do this, will he be punished if he leaves? “Yes…I could only show up for problems….but now, even though I shouldn’t, I will be with you always.” He sounded like he cared, but I was so upset and angry I shouted “IS THAT THE ONLY REASON YOU ARE HERE?” I was yelling at someone who was actually there for me, but the loving feeling he had provided was gone, just a familiar emptiness, like before. “No” He stated calmly, “I chose to do this, I care about you! Do you know how many humans scream when they see me? Do you know how many times I had to move to get away from ghost hunters? Elizzy, you held out your hand to me, and I took it. We will always be friends.” The loved feeling came back, sweeter than Swedish chocolate, sweeter than before. Matt faded away without saying goodbye, like he always had done. In his absence I scanned the scene of the crash, everyone in my family was unconscious but alive, and I only had a few cuts, none that drew blood and three large purple bruises on my arms. Thank god it wasn’t worse, someone could have died, not even the old man in the other car was dead, or even hurt badly. Thank god it wasn’t worse, someone could have died, not even the old man in the other car was dead, or hurt badly. An ambulance came flashing bright red and blue lights that scared the hell out of me, I was just in the hospital, and I want no part of the whiteness of the hallways, or red and blue lights ever again! I refused to get in the large car, as a result the called my grandmother on a cell phone, which at the time for me, was a very confusing, to me it was a magic rectangle that your relatives somehow fit inside of.
    My grandmother picked me up in a small red car, it smelled new; it looked new, shiny, plastic like, new. The terrible smell may have given me a piercing head ache, I may have just recovered from a deadly disease, I may have gotten in a car accident, but at least I have Matt, forever on my side.

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I know this was a little shorter than normal, but I hope this is a good chapter and I hope Iexplained the bit of mary-sue-ness from the last chapter.
posted by VAMPirella1997
This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what you think of it, please?


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Have you felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until you burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! You will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.

Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.
For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around.
For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around.
It always starts with darkness. Just like the rumors that vampires were made to sign Satan's book with blood as the registration, it was thought that a vampire's soul was consumed by darkness. For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around. Sadly, I never had a puppy, so this was all awkwardly new to me.
"That's how it's going to be for a while." Adrian told me one day while I woke up from a deep sleep, facing the sunlight. I had forgotten that we were now affected by that sunlight more than humans....
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You may think that vampires are the most godly creatures on earth, but it takes more than just a bite to be beautiful.
You may think that vampires are the most godly creatures on earth, but it takes more than just a bite to be beautiful.
When those three were together, they represented the family I never had.
Adrian was just Adrian; even though he was astonishingly ragged in appearance, there was something about him that symbolized him being the younger brother. He was dangerous, fast, and cunning with his tongue. I almost thought, that one time I saw him and Marcus battle it out, that Marcus should just give up before he got himself killed. Of course, Marcus knew that already, and they weren't even really fighting to begin with. With what started with growls and ferocious snapping ended up being laughs and pats on the shoulder....
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But I guess this is the price for not agreeing with a vampire.
But I guess this is the price for not agreeing with a vampire.
I woke up to the wailing of birds in the distance and the acrid smell of compost nearby. I couldn't see; it appeared that the night sky blended in with the darkness behind my eyelids when closed. I felt my body plastered against a marble slab that was the same length as my being, and sweat was misted against my skin. Strangely, the only way I could tell this was by leaning my head down to take a peek, realizing my skin was so white that it would be hard to tell if I had any blood at all in my body. My flesh felt numb, and shivering once brought my senses into a lighter view, but only enough...
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posted by HarryPLover
"Do you see the "Game Over"sign?
"Do you see the "Game Over"sign?
Enough is enough,right?After you feel like you just got punched into the stomach fifty times should be enough to let you know that you should stop fighting...right?When you can literally feel your heart ready to burst out of your chest and your soul completely crumble into pieces, pieces that travel all the way down to your toes?

You'll know when your heart is torn...right?

Well I know that mine is,completely actually.After you just lost the one person you thought you would be with forever.After giving them so many chances,that you ran out.Now that they're gone.....gone with your ex-best friend.After...
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posted by lollipopszx3
Chapter 4

After I left the two losers, I mean best friends, I walked to homeroom. Unfourtunatly, Jake was in my homeroom, and automatically he started asking me fifty thousand questions. How did know? Wow, my friends are such freaking nerds.

"So I heard you like a new girl." he said trying not to talk too loud. But sadly some girls and guys nearby heard him.

I was immediately bombared with questions. "Oh my god? How can you fall for such a slut, Joshie!!! You would look so much better in bed, next to me." said Brianna. Oh so that caramilk girl was a slut now? She at least covers her ass!

"What...
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I was bored. I was very bored. There was nothing to do; not a single thing. I grabbed my iPod and turned on the Numa Numa song, but I was still bored. I turned on my laptop and begun writing a short story, which you may very well be reading now, but my boredom was left uncured. Riding in the car was boring, and I wished I had a cell phone to text my friends with, but alas, I was practically broke. I only had around seventy-five bucks, and that was from Christmas. If I had kept my twenty that I had used for IMVU credits, well, then maybe I’d have enough for a go phone at the least. But I had...
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Murder is always a mistake - one should never do anything one cannot talk about at dinner.


Tayce’s p.o.v

The three of us sat there watching the chick flick. I was in grossed in the storyline, Belinda was doing her homework and every time someone said the word love, Ruby nearly chucked. It had been three days since we had seen the protectors. Belinda sighed and put the book she was reading down. “Want to order pizza?” She asked, Ruby shrugged and I shook my head. “Why can’t we order pizza?” Belinda asked, I didn’t really want to tell the why but if you have sisters you understand....
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 6: headache.
I was reading a book on my bed when I heard my phone buzz
-hi Alice!
-hey Bella I was wondering if me and edward could come and see u?
What? People just don’t call and invite theme selves over! ugh! just be nice Bella she's a good vamp or I think she is……
-yeah sure when are u coming?
I asked. I was positive she even had a set time to come here….
-at 3:00 pm it gives u 1 hour to clean and dress up! I'm so happy to come over! Yay!
Then she hung up oooh I don’t want to dress up! Right now I just want to sleep or continuing reading my book! I just climbed of my bed and cleaned...
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posted by JuneLynn
Waking up to the sound of my parent’s shouting I got up to change. Looking out the window, I saw the world was bright and colorful. Many would think it the best time of the day but to me it was the gloomiest time of all. It was the same thing every morning my parents would wake me due to their constant arguments, going to school, and returning back home. Life I felt was just plain boring.

This morning, was no exception because my parents were picking at each other again. I crept into the kitchen to get some breakfast. What I saw was horrifying; the kitchen was a total mess. Nothing was in...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 3: school
I was running in the deep green forest when Damien caught me by my waist I tried to pull away from him trying to get help from my elements but…….nothing the elements weren’t obeying me as they used to. what the hell is wrong with me? I looked at Damien I was sure he had something to do with this he gave me a a sweet smile and said
-now you can’t push me away HONEY
I tried to push him away then I saw a beautiful bronze haired boy with the strange golden eyes he growled and lunched himself at Damien………..

-BEEEP..BEEP..BEEP…BEEP oh I hate this alarm I think I should...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an hour I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...
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Morgan Sterns was sipping up the last drips of her coffee. She was going to need every last drop if she was going to work late enough to finish all of her reports. She had reports on all kinds of things. Serial killers, counterfeiters, asassination attempts, the list went on and on.
Why do the FBI get handed everything, she wondered. But what she really wanted to know was why she was the one always stuck with work when most of the other agents and anaylists were just standing around telling jokes and drinking coffee. Morgan got back to her seat and pushed her almond hair out of her eyes and...
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Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue or white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much more than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a table that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw more of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...
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Lasting Happiness
Lasting Happiness
She stared anxiously at the pot of water on the stove, compelling it to boil. Though the old axiom warned of its counter effect, she had long since given up on trying to look away from the pot, unable to tear her eyes away. Tapping her foot impatiently, she began to sing quietly to herself to pass the time. It was a merry song, the one she always used to entice travelers from the road to come to her window. As she sang she only wished her tune could charm heat into the water of her pot the way it charmed most of the passerby. The thought only seemed to bring her further impatience. The impurity...
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posted by ashesandwine
Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me decide which POV to write...
Thanks as always to Emmett4ever for that first push in the right direction...
And thanks to everyone for reading my story:D


"Catherine's POV"


Even in the darkest night I'll find you. Life wanted our destiny to be a wave breaking in the sea, only that,nothing more... But I will not resign to that, I will not give up, we WILL meet again!


I woke early in the morning, my heart broken into a milion little pieces. I stood there looking at the roof, not wanting to face this new day. I heard my mother call for me:
"Catherine it's time to...
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Chapter Fifteen

Later that day and after dinner and playing games with Mama and Sean, Mac knew that after Sean leaves their home to go back to his own house and once Jamie cleans them up, put them in their pajamas, and read them a story or two, then she can ask her mother about that odd thing she saw that day between her mom and the man who hangs out with them any chance he got.

It was coming closer and closer. After Sean had left, four of the Thomas family is heading into their ‘getting ready for bed’ routine which means taking a bath, taking sure that the kids had brushed their teeth, used...
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Chapter Fourteen

It wasn’t the dinner that they didn’t had before. It was very different. It was a dinner of confusion especially for the two little girls.

During the dinner of steak, mashed potatoes, and peas, Mac and Izzie watched their Mama and Mr. Sean eat their dinner in silent even through Mac saw Sean giving her mother some glimpses of his grins to Jamie to tell her that this was a great dinner she served. Hoping that Mama saw those grins that Sean saw her, the only thing she saw that her mother was just eating her dinner, drinking her Iced Tea, and wiping the messes that was on Jake’s...
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My story will start where everybody else's starts. At birth. I was born on a Memorial Day. There was only one doctor and he was too busy watching the Orlando Magic game to help my mother bring a child into the world. And so, I was a half time baby. With the Magics losing, my family waiting in the hall, and the doctor wishing he was watching the game, I was pushed harshly into this cold, bright and scary world.
First words out of my father's mouth when the doctor placed me into his hands, "Heidi's kinda ugly, isn't she?" For God's sake! I was just pulled out of a woman's stomach! The nurses...
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i was a normal 18 year old colledge student until that night that horid night the night that all saftyein my life died it was a cold winters night and me and my friend trent were going to stay the night at the most haunted hospital in the world ( more like most haunted place of death and despair)waverly hlls sanitoryoum. "come on tristen were going to be laughing stocks of the city if we dont go" "trent." i said " i dont think we should go" " are u chicening out." he said " no" i snapped " but its not right" i argued to him "its these millions of death beads and u have famly that died there and so do i" " he looked mad at me mentioning his uncle who died there but i had to make him stop. "no" he said " we are going." to hell i thought if only i new