One date...One date will not hurt me Brian thought muttering to himself inside of his dimly lit room. His room was darkened by picures of obscure creatures, that he hand drew, he is an outstanding aritist, all of his work is so detailed, if he drew a indow, with scenery behind it, you'd actually think it was one, you might make a fool out of yourself by tring to open it or clean it....but thats how good he was. He can't get her off his mind. Luna and Brian were about to go on there first (planned) date. Suprising, Brian, being a Demon of the Dark,was nervous. Nervous? How can I be NERVOUS? I. KILL. PEOPLE. And I am nervous about this date? Brian thought long and hard until Luna came to his doortep. He was a loss for words when he saw her bautiful schokingly electric blue dress. It seemed as if the name "Luna" owned that color. It suited her.
Luna was happy that he likes her dress.
But the butterflies in her stomach would not calm down. In fact they seemed to multiply untill sever thousand tiny butterflies were flapping around freely, unaware of the discomphort they cause her. "You ready?" I asked "Sure..." He stated. And we headed off to the Italian Bistro down the street. [i]I noticed his house isn't very...bright...did he sneak out? Was his parents out of town? Did they not have lights? It's none of my bussiness Luna convinced herself that it was nothing for the creepy imagery of his house, and continured to foucus on the road, no need to die of a car cash being out on a date wih this amazing guy!
Once made in, and out of the Bistro the two were laughing and chatting like old friends.
"No way! He did not say that to you!" Luna giggled out. Brian, having a hard time controlling the laughter himself, "He totally did! I don't lie!" One minute, the atmosphere was light and gigglish, than in an instant overwhelming passion was in the eyes of Brian. Luna noticed and stared lovingly at him. At that moment, Brian leaned forward, awestruck with passion and love, the two shared there first kiss. And of all the kinds, it was beautiful.
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Okay, how was the firt kiss scene I ever wrote? Anyone still dieing of curiousity? Did you like the story in general? Please comment, and if you can please make my story better by shwing constructive critizism. Thank you :)
Luna was happy that he likes her dress.
But the butterflies in her stomach would not calm down. In fact they seemed to multiply untill sever thousand tiny butterflies were flapping around freely, unaware of the discomphort they cause her. "You ready?" I asked "Sure..." He stated. And we headed off to the Italian Bistro down the street. [i]I noticed his house isn't very...bright...did he sneak out? Was his parents out of town? Did they not have lights? It's none of my bussiness Luna convinced herself that it was nothing for the creepy imagery of his house, and continured to foucus on the road, no need to die of a car cash being out on a date wih this amazing guy!
Once made in, and out of the Bistro the two were laughing and chatting like old friends.
"No way! He did not say that to you!" Luna giggled out. Brian, having a hard time controlling the laughter himself, "He totally did! I don't lie!" One minute, the atmosphere was light and gigglish, than in an instant overwhelming passion was in the eyes of Brian. Luna noticed and stared lovingly at him. At that moment, Brian leaned forward, awestruck with passion and love, the two shared there first kiss. And of all the kinds, it was beautiful.
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Okay, how was the firt kiss scene I ever wrote? Anyone still dieing of curiousity? Did you like the story in general? Please comment, and if you can please make my story better by shwing constructive critizism. Thank you :)
Jaycee's POV
I lay there besides Liana, she is sleeping, I rest my hand on her soft delicate face, she stirrs in her sleep. Her eyes flutter open and she gaze's at me.
"Mmmmm, Mommy wh-where are we?" She asks. "Texas" I reply. She looks around, blood is spattered everywhere no is around except the dead boddies. She screams stands up and starts to panic. "Li, Li Calm down!" I say calmly. "Wha-What happened!!!" I sighed, I couldnt belive she cant remember. "Were isolated in a tiny town in texas remember?????" I asked. She paused thought for a minute and shook her head.
I lay there besides Liana, she is sleeping, I rest my hand on her soft delicate face, she stirrs in her sleep. Her eyes flutter open and she gaze's at me.
"Mmmmm, Mommy wh-where are we?" She asks. "Texas" I reply. She looks around, blood is spattered everywhere no is around except the dead boddies. She screams stands up and starts to panic. "Li, Li Calm down!" I say calmly. "Wha-What happened!!!" I sighed, I couldnt belive she cant remember. "Were isolated in a tiny town in texas remember?????" I asked. She paused thought for a minute and shook her head.
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