This is my first ever fan fiction so plz give me some feedback! Thanx

(Gwen's POV)
It was 6:32am while I was playing my brand new drum set I got for Christmas. I was rocking out to one of my favorite songs, Misery Business by Paramore when my mom yelled from down stairs, "Gwen, it's time to get ready for your first day of your new high school. It was the first day of school and me and some other students (i.e Heather, Bridgette, and LeShawna) received special scholarships to this new prep school for Advanced Natural Talents. I trudged to the bathroom, grabbed my brush, and brushed my black and teal silky hair until it was soft and smooth. I slipped out of my pjs and into my dark clothes, something that I usually wore at my old school. I jogged down stairs, grabbed an apple, and met Bridgette and LeShawna at my bus stop. "Hey girl." LeShawna greeted me. "S'up Gwen?" Bridgette greeted after her. "Hey Guys." I replied. "Where's Queen Bea?" I rolled my eyes at the thought of the one and only. "Who Heather?", LeShawna snorted, "Don't worry about it girl. If we're lucky, maybe she got run over my a bus this summer." I chuckled but it soon stopped once I saw a bus turn a corner heading our way. I glanced over at my bus pass, then over at the bus number painted on the side of the automobile. Yep, that's the one, 323. I sighed and took at deep breath.

(Duncan's POV)
So I was just sitting on the bus next to my buddy, Geoff. Everyone who got picked up from their bus stop already, I already knew. I sat in front of Courtney, my girlfriend, with a bored expression on my face. Then, we went to a new bus stop, an area that I wasn't familiar with. I sat up in my seat and stared out the window for a new face. When the bus stopped, I didn't see just one new face, I saw 3 new faces. They were all chicks, and they all looked sorta hot too. When these 3 girls stepped onto the bus, it was pretty obvious that pretty much everyone was staring at them. A goth, a surfer chick, and a wannabe. I could tell somebody's personality by just the looks of them. The Goth and the Surfer Girl sat down in the front, probably trying to ignore the crowd staring at them from the back. I bet they didn't notice that Geoff and I were sitting from the seat across from them. The Wannabe strutted to the back of the bus hollering, "What's up yall, LeShawna's in the house!" "Loud Mouth." I snickered. I looked over to the cute goth and mellow surfer girl across me and smiled. They still didn't notice me, but Courtney did. She realized me staring at them and fake coughed just to disturb my thoughts. I snapped out of it and turned to Geoff. I noticed Geoff looking at the surfer girl. "So you gonna go for it or what?" I asked Geoff. "W-What?" Geoff stammered. "Dude I know you want her why don't you say something?" Geoff rolled his eyes. I was just about to say something when Elvis butted in.

(Gwen's POV)
Ok so I was just sitting next to Bridgette when I saw this guy sitting across from us, smiling at us. I tried to make it look like I didn't notice him but it was tempting to look back. He was kinda cute. I buried my head in my book when a guy sitting behind me peeked out of the aisle and finally said, "Hey." I looked over to him. "Um..hi." I struggled. "Ok keep your kool Gwen." I thought to myself. He continued, "My name is Trent. What's yours?" he asked. "I'm Gwen." he smiled at me and I attempted to smile back. Trent sat back down and then the guy sitting next to me, the one with the green mohawk said, "Hey Sunshine." he calmly stated. Sunshine? What that supposed to be a pick up line? From all of this time staring at me he finally came up with a nick name for me. I saw the girl sitting behind him glare at him with daggers. I was too nervous to speak. He continued, " My name is Duncan and I hear that you're Gwen." How did he already know that? I think he was eavesdropping on my conversation with Trent. I chuckled. "Eavesdrop much?" I sarcastically replied. He chuckled back and I noticed Bridgette staring at me with her, "I know what you're thinking" face. I playfully rolled my eyes at her expression. "So you're new here? What's you're talent? (remember it's an Advanced Natural Talent School.)" Art and Music. I play the drums, the electric guitar, the acoustic guitar, and the violin." I murmured that last part. " Excuse me, I'm afraid I didn't hear that last part." he joked. I know he heard me he was just being a jerk. "Jerk." I joked. "Why would a goth like you play such a sucky instrument like the violin?" he laughed. "Excuse me." um Courtney I think butted in. "The violin is a beautiful instrument who plays lovely music once played by a master." she bragged as she pointed to herself. I snorted under my breath. "So why the violin?" he continued. The bus reached our destination. "I'll tell you once we get another chance to talk." He smiled at that thought and everyone was unloaded off the bus. I think I'll give this punk a chance. Seems like a good start for the school year but the question still remains in my head, "Where is that stuck up, daddy's girl, queen bee, Heather?" Oh well. I can't wait to talk to Duncan again. Why did I just say that? I just met the dude but I can't help smiling every time I think of him. I snapped myself back into reality and walked inside the building, my new high school. This is gonna be a great year!



Hope you liked it. Part 2 would most likely be up by tomorrow.