I was on a writing streak. looks like a new part quickly! also, in the comments, answer this, would it be better to have a lot of short parts quickly, or longer parts that show up farther apart? Hope you like the new part! finally, what every fanfiction needs, a love interest!
Oh, no. Tak was obviously here to take revenge on me and Zim for stopping her snack plan. She was going to kill me, take my lifeless body as bait for Zim, and then kill him, too. Then, she’d leave and let the Earth die away. I started sweating, and I closed my eyes. The window opened, and the arm pulled me closer to the being that would surely kill me. I opened my eyes, and could feel her angry breath on my face. Her mouth opened. Her voice began, and she whispered, “You’re smarter than the others.” I felt the blood rush to my face. I didn’t even feel it when Tak dropped me and I hit the ground. I suddenly felt warm. God damn it, what was I doing?! I had to get something to defend myself! I ran inside my house and ran past my dad. He was sitting in the corner, looking down and being completely silent. “Dad?” I slowly walked up to him. I knew after he found out that I was right would shock him, but did he actually go insane? He did not say anything for a long period of time. I was just about to call 911 when he spoke to me. “Son, I’m…sorry. I’m sorry for putting you through this. If you hate me for creating you, that’s alright…” He looked up, and I saw tears in his eyes. This was the very first time he had ever shown emotion to me, and it made me feel guilty. I shook it off. It was like otherworldly forces were placing all of this psychological stuff in my way so that I don’t save the Earth. God, I needed to move. I ran back outside, and the chaos was unbelievable. The ships had already landed, and humans were being taken aboard a medium sized ship. If any of them resisted, they were shocked, or killed. Blood splattered on the streets, leaking into the sewers. I almost fainted, and I would have, if an Irkan soldier hadn’t shocked me. I cried out, and fell. I stood back up, and kicked the soldier’s feet, causing him to fall on the ground. I picked up his shocking rod, and shocked him to death. The other Irkan troopers saw the commotion, and headed towards me. There was nowhere to run, the soldiers were closing in on me, and I only had one weapon. Right when I was about to get shocked to death, Tak’s ship came down and grabbed me. I was quickly pulled up, and pulled up to the front of the ship while Tak and I were moving forward in the air. Again, the window opened to show Tak. I tried to say something, but for some stupid reason I couldn’t. I got a very nervous feeling. Back then, I thought it was fear. Later, I would find out it was affection. “So, Dib, I have gotten you away from my kind’s soldiers. What do you have to say?” I tried to struggle out of the arm’s grip, but its strength was too strong. “I…I…What are going to do to me? That’s why you rescued me, isn’t it? You saved me because you want to kill me all to yourself?!” I started to panic. “God, you are annoying. That’s why I can’t explain it. But, I’ll try. You see, after you and Zim shot me off into space in my escape pod, now as you can see it upgraded to a full-time ship, I floated around helplessly for about a year. The only thing I could do was cry for help, and think. Every time I tried to think, my thoughts landed to you. For some reason, the thought of you calmed me. For a whole year, I survived. Just because of you. Don’t you see, Dib? You kept me from going insane, or even possibly killing myself. I was just returning the favor by rescuing you…” She blushed. I felt like my body had went up twenty degrees. I blushed back. There was a short pause, then Tak snapped out of the trance. “But that’s it! That’s the only reason why I saved you!” The arm dropped me. I started to fall. I couldn’t think. I couldn’t breathe. All I could say while I fell was just loud enough for Tak to hear. “I think I like you…” She looked down and gasped. She reached out her hand. But of course, It did not work. She quickly went back into the ship and reached out the arm, and grabbed me off the ground. Our faces met and then we both said; “Let’s get Zim.”
Oh, no. Tak was obviously here to take revenge on me and Zim for stopping her snack plan. She was going to kill me, take my lifeless body as bait for Zim, and then kill him, too. Then, she’d leave and let the Earth die away. I started sweating, and I closed my eyes. The window opened, and the arm pulled me closer to the being that would surely kill me. I opened my eyes, and could feel her angry breath on my face. Her mouth opened. Her voice began, and she whispered, “You’re smarter than the others.” I felt the blood rush to my face. I didn’t even feel it when Tak dropped me and I hit the ground. I suddenly felt warm. God damn it, what was I doing?! I had to get something to defend myself! I ran inside my house and ran past my dad. He was sitting in the corner, looking down and being completely silent. “Dad?” I slowly walked up to him. I knew after he found out that I was right would shock him, but did he actually go insane? He did not say anything for a long period of time. I was just about to call 911 when he spoke to me. “Son, I’m…sorry. I’m sorry for putting you through this. If you hate me for creating you, that’s alright…” He looked up, and I saw tears in his eyes. This was the very first time he had ever shown emotion to me, and it made me feel guilty. I shook it off. It was like otherworldly forces were placing all of this psychological stuff in my way so that I don’t save the Earth. God, I needed to move. I ran back outside, and the chaos was unbelievable. The ships had already landed, and humans were being taken aboard a medium sized ship. If any of them resisted, they were shocked, or killed. Blood splattered on the streets, leaking into the sewers. I almost fainted, and I would have, if an Irkan soldier hadn’t shocked me. I cried out, and fell. I stood back up, and kicked the soldier’s feet, causing him to fall on the ground. I picked up his shocking rod, and shocked him to death. The other Irkan troopers saw the commotion, and headed towards me. There was nowhere to run, the soldiers were closing in on me, and I only had one weapon. Right when I was about to get shocked to death, Tak’s ship came down and grabbed me. I was quickly pulled up, and pulled up to the front of the ship while Tak and I were moving forward in the air. Again, the window opened to show Tak. I tried to say something, but for some stupid reason I couldn’t. I got a very nervous feeling. Back then, I thought it was fear. Later, I would find out it was affection. “So, Dib, I have gotten you away from my kind’s soldiers. What do you have to say?” I tried to struggle out of the arm’s grip, but its strength was too strong. “I…I…What are going to do to me? That’s why you rescued me, isn’t it? You saved me because you want to kill me all to yourself?!” I started to panic. “God, you are annoying. That’s why I can’t explain it. But, I’ll try. You see, after you and Zim shot me off into space in my escape pod, now as you can see it upgraded to a full-time ship, I floated around helplessly for about a year. The only thing I could do was cry for help, and think. Every time I tried to think, my thoughts landed to you. For some reason, the thought of you calmed me. For a whole year, I survived. Just because of you. Don’t you see, Dib? You kept me from going insane, or even possibly killing myself. I was just returning the favor by rescuing you…” She blushed. I felt like my body had went up twenty degrees. I blushed back. There was a short pause, then Tak snapped out of the trance. “But that’s it! That’s the only reason why I saved you!” The arm dropped me. I started to fall. I couldn’t think. I couldn’t breathe. All I could say while I fell was just loud enough for Tak to hear. “I think I like you…” She looked down and gasped. She reached out her hand. But of course, It did not work. She quickly went back into the ship and reached out the arm, and grabbed me off the ground. Our faces met and then we both said; “Let’s get Zim.”
(Zim's POV)
She was tall. She had black hair. She obviously wasn't human. Sparky was her name, and she was purple, and furry... so furry... with beautiful, ocean blue eyes, and the sharpest nails. Her teeth- they were not teeth, they were fangs. Fangs that could probably rip someone apart. One bite, and it's all over.
Ms. Bitters put Sparky next to me. A couple minutes into class, I found a slip of paper on my desk. I opened it:
Hey.
I looked over at Sparky, and she smiled. I'm sure it was intended to be a friendly one, but it was everything but. Those fangs...
I didn't reply. She followed me around all day. I was glad when Skool let out. But everywhere I looked, I saw a strange creature, not Irken nor human.
When I returned to my base, I went down to my lab. I no sooner got there whe the doorbell rang. I commanded Gir to answer, and I got into my disguise. I then went to the first floor.
When I got there, I didn't like what I saw. Not one bit.
She was tall. She had black hair. She obviously wasn't human. Sparky was her name, and she was purple, and furry... so furry... with beautiful, ocean blue eyes, and the sharpest nails. Her teeth- they were not teeth, they were fangs. Fangs that could probably rip someone apart. One bite, and it's all over.
Ms. Bitters put Sparky next to me. A couple minutes into class, I found a slip of paper on my desk. I opened it:
Hey.
I looked over at Sparky, and she smiled. I'm sure it was intended to be a friendly one, but it was everything but. Those fangs...
I didn't reply. She followed me around all day. I was glad when Skool let out. But everywhere I looked, I saw a strange creature, not Irken nor human.
When I returned to my base, I went down to my lab. I no sooner got there whe the doorbell rang. I commanded Gir to answer, and I got into my disguise. I then went to the first floor.
When I got there, I didn't like what I saw. Not one bit.