for those faithful readers of mine you know the drill but really read the first 8 before this to understand fan me if you like and comment on what i could improve on. and tell me if you like

Michael was charging toward me with his ice nightstick and i readyed to defend myself but something was off.
He was two feet from me now and i could see he was going for a lunge at my chest how i knew i didn't know but i just had a feeling as if i could see it actually happening. He was so close i could hear his heart beat, at the last second i side stepped his lunge but he seemed to anticipate that and hit my left knee i crumpled to my knees which only hurt my knee more Annabeth gave a gasp from the bleachers "block percy don't dodge" Michael said, i made a noise saying okay but it sounded more like a grunt. He allowed me to get up again before going for another hit at me "okay this time you can dodge and hit me okay."
"fine" once i was up again he started swinging at me and i was blocking and countering while he didn't do much but swing and let me hit him though i hope he was going hard on me. "good, your doing good percy." michael said "ready to go all out?"
"uh, okay" i replied
"i should tell you i fight dirty, sure you still want to go?"
"sure bring it." i think i sounded to confident because michael smirked. quick as a flash he melted his weapon and refroze it around my feet i couldn't move my feet at all "this should teach you to block, besides cetus doesn't fight fair either." and with that he swung his foot fast at my legs and i had to bend down to block leaving my back exposed though i hope he wouldn't hit me there. but he didn't he swung at my neck next but i blocked with my hand this time and threw my weapon away ready for hand to hand combat he tried to kick me in the face i caught his foot somehow and knocked him onto his back. He then spun on his head and kicked me twice on my bad knee and i crumpled to the ground again but i was still conscience and i willed the water around my feet to melt and hit michael in the stomach. he obviously expected this and took it from my control to then be turned into straps that hit me and freeze me to the ground again "you did very good percy" michael said while putting his shirt back on. The straps melted and i could walk again, more like limping on my bad knee. "oh, let me fix that for you." he controlled the water from our weapons to swirl around my knee it instantly felt better and the water fell away having my knee feel good as new "what, how did you do that?" i questioned "you just swirl water around a wound and think hard of that thing healing and it goes back to normal." annabeth was on the field again "you did great percy." annabeth said while giving me a kiss "here's your shirt." she continued i must've blushed very hard as i put my shirt back on. "hey you guys there's a party going on want to go?"
"sure" me and annabeth said at the same time. As we were walking out of the training room the icicle lights turned off and we walked into michaels sweet living room
"i just gotta take a shower first." Michael said
"we can wait." annabeth replied. He went up his spiral staircase. "look at this percy." annabeth said
"what is it?"
"it's a picture of ares crying"
"no way, serious?" the water started running
"really look." she showed me the picture Ares was on a bed looking totally depressed with three empty containers of chocalate ice cream.
"i had no idea he missed clarisse this much." i said
"neither did i, the photographer is probably dead right now."
"it says here 'ares the god of war is found crying his eyes out over the kidnapping of his favorite daughter Clarisse La Rue her whereabouts are unknown Ares has offered a large reward for her safe return to camp half-blood in long island sound he was not able to comment on who he has asked to save his daughter but he says the group is the very best and are close friends to Clarisse so we can only figure that ares has sent children to do his work for him. in this reporters mind this is not the smartest move.' brutal"
"i wonder how ares is taking it right now?" i asked
"i don't know but he must be angry about that scathing article about him." the water stopped running
"well almost party time peoples." michael yelled from upstairs
"ya know i've never actually been to a party that wasn't my own." annabeth said
"well it looks like were gonna find out how its done." i replied. Once i said that michael jumped off the second floor and landed perfectly "to go ya'll?"
"lets do it." i said and with that Michael opened the door and we were hit by a blast of loud music. Coming from the square with the statues. Time felt like it went much faster here because it was already dark out and all the lights on in each house illuminating the entire community they were playing Feel Good Inc. We all started to dance really stupid but i know i didn't want to, a feeling came over me to do it. And out of nowhere the music changed as if someone took off the record and a slow love song started. I remembered the song from somewhere and i grabbed annabeth in a lovers embrace and started to slow dance, it felt like i needed to do it. But i wasn't complaining it turned out everyone had someone they were slow dancing with. again the music changed to a very fast song and everyone including me started ballroom dancing i was lifting annabeth and twirling her and throwing her and then catching her as she fell and everyone did a final dip, and there was a kiss with me and annabeth and it was amazing i didn't care who watched. Thats what i thought when i looked up and aphrodite was standing there with a huge smile on her face. "i told you it would happen percy." aphrodite said and she exploded into a dozen doves and rose petals but no one seemed to notice but me and annabeth. "that was awkward" i said the music changed to techno but me and annabeth stayed together to dance this one out. The music changed from showtune, to jazz, to heavy metal, to pop, to alternative, to reggae, to some hannah montana song Michael actually ran up to the massive stereo and took out the CD and snapped it in half to cheers from the crowd because we all know she's a monster thats best at hypnotizing young kids. The music continued for regular intervals and for the next hour or so we danced the night away until the music stopped completely. The party was over. And i was exhausted michael walked up with jillian passed out in his arms. "i'm gonna take jillian back to her house i'll meet you back home percy just cover your hand in ice and push it through the center trident point on the door to get in okay?"
"sure thing." i replied.
Once we got inside me and annabeth crashed on the couch together with her in my arms and in about two seconds we were asleep.