Writing Article: The Eagle (this is a poem,a little dark too)

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The Eagle (this is a poem,a little dark too)

posted by CapShunsuifan13

THE EAGLE

Red splatters the walls, the floors...

The Eagles yellow eyes
His claws tear, his beak rips

His malicious intent present in its speech
His black shadow falls
Its darkness full and everlasting

Leaving no physical mark but
Its evidence in the eyes of the Knowing
Only they can see
Only they recognize the signs

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Pain is in the mind of the sufferer
Invisible and dangerous
It strikes silently
Clouding the mind

It consumes
It feeds
Never backing off
Happiness becomes the past
Anger the present
What of the future?

No one knows
No one can know
No one understands
No one can understand
The inflicted is left alone
Even in the presence of others
All is left behind

Red splatters the walls, the floors
Inside the heart
All becomes dark and painful
In the mind
The world disappears
And the mirrors appear
Self reflected from within
Only the Sufferer can know

What really goes on
Within the mind?
Those who know
Are those long gone
Are those who've suffered the least
Are those who left behind the victims
And traded themselves in
For the hope of something better
A hope never realized

The Knowing are never there to end it
To stop it
To prevent it
To help it
And the future doesn't seem bright
Only the Sufferer knows
Only the Sufferer understands
Only they know what's in the mind
And only the Sufferer knows
When the Eagle will strike

hgfan5602, GINSDARKANGEL and 2 others like this

flabaloobalah *holds breath while reading, lets out big sigh when done.)) sweet juji fruits. that was gritty and beautiful.

CapShunsuifan13 WOW! Thank you flabaloobalah! I like your username btw

FonzFan82 I liked it. I thought it rhymed a bit.

CapShunsuifan13 Ha never realized it ryhmed :)

Heros_Shadow *looks at the first line, already loves it* ... *finishes it* That is the best free verse poem I've ever read! You are really talented!

Sinna_Hime_chan Truly very intense. Most poetry tell s us a story and yours did, however a bit dark & sad in the certain aspect from "the sufferer"...but that is part of your picture, and in real life, the wild is not always nice... (Though I hear bald eagles mate for life -maybe other eagles do & I like the golden too)... YOUR verse was very descript and I like that, it makes for a very good read to me. Thank you for asking me to read & for my opinion. I think you write well. I enjoyed the journey reading the illustration you wrote! I have some talented friends!! Indeed. 'And I do hope to become even better friends.

Shirohige1939 Wow it's a really good poem. I like it :) so thanks that you share this good poem with us ^_^

GINSDARKANGEL I REALLY LOVED IT. IT'S SAD, BUT AWSOME. I SAVED IT TO MY FAVS ON MY PAGE. YOU ARE GOING TO BECOME A FAMOSE WRITER ONE OF THESE DAYS. I REALLY HOPE YOU WRITE MORE SIS. IS IT OK IF I SHOW IT TO SOME OF MY FRIENDS. I KNOW THEY ARE GOING TO LOVE IT. I REALLY DID CRY AFTER READING THIS SO IT TOOK A LITTLE BEFORE I COULD POST A COMMENT. YOU DID GREAT. AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. LOVE YOU SIS!!!

hgfan5602 Very intense and sad. But it is also very strong. That's exactly what a good writer has. The ability to transfer emotions to the reader.

elizasmomma no it';s not dark at all in fact it looks and sounds like some-thing edgar allan poe would write>

Date Night*sequel to prom night*(Chapter Three:Dinner Time Trauma)

posted by moolah

Date Night *sequel*
Chapter Three: Dinner Time Trauma
By: moolah
Haley groaned as she heard knocking on the back window. She was on top and barely had her bra and undies on. She quickly pecked Sean on the cheek and put on her yellow tunic on. She put on her gray skinny jeans on then. She ran her hand threw her hair and hopped out of the car. Luke was standing there in his clothes with Ian on his hip. “Are you guys doing something I shouldn’t know about?” Haley smiled and said, “Yeah, probably. Now, what is it?” Luke raised his left eyebrow and said simply,...

Camp Deluca

posted by lindizzle215

Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to our family camp that we help with every year, we still do but were all teenagers so were counselors now.

"Cam lets go I want to get there at a desist hour." Joey said
"Fine, I'll be there in a minute." I said back while sitting on my suit case tiring to zip it up.
"Need some help?" Duke asked leaning against the door frame.
"Yes, please." I said
He came over, zipped my bags up and took some down stairs. I grabbed my other bags and ran down stairs. I put my bags down and said goodbye to everyone and that I would see them all in a few days....

[Poem] Too Dark

posted by HarryPLover

Its too dark
Too dark to see what is going on
Tripping over the couch
Slamming into the wall
stepping on the remote
It was too dark
The undone dishes
The scattered roses
The broken picture
My broken heart
It was too dark
Believing it would change
That he would change
A Waste
A waste of my time
My Effort
The “No Messages” left on my phone
It was too dark
It was too dark to see what had happened
Too dark to try to fix things
Its just too dark
Someone turn on the light
That light bulb in my head of what Ive done wrong
Its too dark

Twincest...The love That could never b (Chap 1 the begining)

posted by Cries_Bloodlova

This Story begans with a man. And his Brother Tom. Tom Was 20 yrs old n Played Gutiar in a band called Tokio hotel. Tom Was cacasin n had dirty blonde long dreads. Always Wore Gucci Close n Fifty59s (Type of hat) he Was 6,2. his Twin Brother bill on the Other Hand. had blk long Hair like a lion. Cacasin n Dresses Rocker Style 6'2. Wears Make up n Nail polish. n is The lead Singer in Tokio hotle. in That band r 2 Other mebers of That band Gustav n George
Gustav has Short Hair big Glases n is The Drumer. George has Shighty long hair down 2 his Sholders n Was The bass Gutairest. This band n These...

The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 5

posted by Triscia95

This one is pretty short but I've been so busy, hope you like it comment and tell me what you think.

Elena’s POV
I woke up to find the curtains being draw open and Stefan gone. Every thing seemed a little fuzzy. I could see a figure walked towards me. I sat up in bed and rubbed my eyes.
“Good morning sleeping beauty.” Damon spoke softly. When things came back to focus I saw Damon half dressed, wearing just a pair of sweats.
I ran my fingers threw my hair pulling it out of my face. “Where’s Stefan.” “Not here, in fact it’s just you and me. Hungry?”
He got up and headed for the...

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The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 4

posted by Triscia95

Katherine’s POV
I leaned off the wall smiling. “I can tell that you didn’t miss me.” I said turning to Stefan my smile fading.
I turned back to Damon smiling. “I can’t tell much if you miss me with all that ‘I love you Elena.” I glided my hands over his perfectly sculpted abs. His shirt so thin you could feel every little curve.
My fingers moving up his stomach one by one. “You seem to love Elena so much, have you ever wanted to tasted her blood, because I know I’ve been dying to.” I said running my thumb over his lower lip.

Damon’s POV
From the moment she spoke my body...

The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 2

posted by Triscia95

Elena's POV

"Why don't you sit down and we can talk." I was pressed tightly up against the counter. "No need to be scared." Katherine was smiling as she took steps towards me. "Katherine this is between Damon, Stefan and you not me." Katherine tilted her head and shook it tell me no. "Honey this is about you."

Damon's POV

"How the hell could you do that? Damon I asked you to do this for Elena." Stefan was furious. I just rolled my eyes. "Your just upset because she may also have feelings for me to, just like Katherine."

Stefan sat there shaking his head. "Don't you get it Damon Katherine never...

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I figured out I couldn't enter this in a writing contest after I wrote it...

posted by QueenVictoria73

So, I am alway on the look out for writing contests with inspiring prompts for me to enter. I got really exited when I found this one:
link because I had an idea for it right away. I spent all afternoon researching the Battle of Little Bighorn, because I wanted to set it in the aftermath of that battle, and writing it, instead of writing a biography of William Blake that I was supposed to be doing for school :P. then, when I went to go submit it, I figured out the people wanted me to sign up for a membership to their website for $6.75 a month to enter the contest, which I don't really want to....

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Still of the night ch.17 (Jack's POV)

posted by TeamRosalieHale

17: Wheel in the Sky

Dying is not what most people think it is-nothing flashes before your eyes, there’s no white light or what have you. The only thing I felt was pain, the blood flowing through my shirt and fingers, making them sticky and beginning to form a coat on my clothes. I couldn’t see much beyond the few feet in front of me, the sun had long such set and darkness had fallen on swift wings. There was one sound: my blood pulsing like it was right in my ears. Eventually I made it to the grass hill where I fell, too weak to walk another step.
While I lay there, certain I was destined...

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The Sisters: Chapter 6: Dear Dairy

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Bobby’s p.o.v

After I had spent the night with Tayce I went back to the protector’s dorms, they weren’t as nice as the house or cleaner for that matter but it was a place to sleep. I noticed Kale sitting on his bed reading some chapter book Belinda had recommended earlier this week. He looked up and smirked. “Where did you go?” he asked, I coughed and sat down next him. “Walk” I said, his judgmental eyes followed mine. “Gee that was so convincing” He said, I playfully pushed him. “So what, it’s not like I’m the killer” I said, I could tell he believed me, but he still...

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a cursed story:chapter 8 & 9!: not a sweet life:(

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 8: not a sweet life
I woke up with Damien's arms tightened around my naked chest.ewww eww eww eww, I swear I’ll kill him! i slid myself out of his grasp and flew to my closet I quietly wore something to escape from him while I was putting on my jeans I was thinking of some place where Damien cant find me, I really couldn’t think of any where so I grabbed my bag and headed to the door hope fully Damien was still sleeping I opened the door and quietly closed it behind me I rushed to my car when jasper interrupted me
-Bella what's wrong? Your so scared and worried.
Not a good timing please...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 4 An Honest Tale Speeds Best Being Plainly Told Part 2

posted by H-A-T-R-M

The four of them started walking straight ahead, if this was a large creature you’d think you could spot the thing. Grito said they can be quite the handful and we can’t kill it, just capture it. “See anything yet?” Opal Asked. “Grass, lots and lots of grass” Marley Answered. After giving Marley an evil look, they continued through the field. Little did they know, this field, was no normal flied. “It’s about time, right?” Parvulo Asked. As Grito washed his face, he answered “Yeah, the field will break apart soon”. Just after Grito spoke the ground shook. “What was that?...

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black moon chapter 18

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella you finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see you vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend or something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella you were sleeping here for 100 years!and now you finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1-part 3

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
My first class was chemistry and I sat in the second row next to a skinny girl with short blond hair talking to another girl behind us. From their conversation I learned her name was Stacey and the other was Beonca and they were both cheerleaders.
The teacher started to talk about the rules and objectives for this year but no one was paying attention,they were much more interested in texting on their cell phones or passing notes to the person next to them. I wasn't that interested in what the teacher said ether so my mind wondered off....
The bell woke me out of my day dreams. As Stacey...

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Forbidden Love - Chapter 4

posted by ashesandwine

Sorry for just posting it in this spot now:( If you want you can join my spot and reading it as soon as it's ready:D

"Daniel POV"

We wrote so much letters to each other, even if we were just a few blocs away... I still remmember our first letter; I had so much to say, so much that I wanted her to know, how could I put all of my love into one letter? So I said the only thing I could say:

"I only know that I belong where you are!"

Her response was something that I will never forget:

"You're my fragement of light in the end of the tunnel, you're my reason to fight when everything is getting dark..."...

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The adventerous killing of Duncan

posted by Katiegirl

Narrator: Macbeth slowly entered the crept room were Duncan was sleeping soundly. Macbeth quietly began to reach for his sharpened dagger. Macbeth pondered many thoughts regarding the demise of Duncan, but never to this degree. Now, the time had come to fulfill the quest to be crowned king. Duncan suddenly returns to reality. Visualizing Macbeth by his bedside withholding a dagger pointed at his wretched chest. Would this mean the end of Macbeth’s planned tragedy or the end of Duncan’s existence?
Duncan: Cousin, why hast thou forsaken me?
Macbeth: Forsaken you? Thou hast forsaken me. Thou...

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Trapped in my own time chapter 5

posted by dragonrider

I pull into the parking lot of the country council men office and get out. Hmm what should I do with Elliot? I can't leave him in the car he'll die of heat. I could leave the air on. Nah I'll just put him behind stage when I talk to the councilmen.
I pull out Elliot and put him over my shoulder. Everybody is strong in the future.
Elliot murmurs something like "Oh I love you too Starr!"
Aww how sweet. I take out duct tape and tape his mouth shut. Ahh that's much better
I carry Elliot towards the building and when I get inside I don't see Whitney. Hmm that's strange she works here shouldn't...

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A boring play in which everyone is messed up in thier own way. : )

posted by BURITOES

Charactors:

Hayley Williams
Taylor York
Zac Farro
Jeremy Davis
Josh Farro
Lacey Mosely
Lady GaGa
Kanye West
Soulja Boy
Joe Jonas
Zac Efron
Erin
Dallas Winston(Dally)
Ponyboy Curtis
Alice Cullen
Mandy
--------------------------------------------------

Lady GaGa: Why don't we go out tonight?

Kanye: Can't concert tonight.

Lady GaGa: Hayley?

Hayley: Ummmm depends.

Zac: Cum awn GaGa I'll go wit cha.

This is all I'm posting. I want to see if I get any responses first. : )

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A Sirens Call...draft first book i plan to write please read and give advice thnx

posted by A_Sirens_Call

A sirens call…

Chapter 1: Purple Eyes?

First day back never expected any class to be fun except maybe drama or music, I played the keyboard and my best friends hated music and as always they tried to avoid any conversation involving the shy girl who apparently has a beautiful singing voice but some reason the girls flinch away from the sound of her voice even when talking yet all the guys – straight and bi – seem to be mesmerised like there was nothing else that mattered like there was a different entity involved. I have only heard her sing once when we were in eighth grade everyone either...

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Untitled Preface and chapter 1 Katy's Perspective

posted by dragonrider

My second super hero story. There are five characters and they meet the same person on different days. It takes five days for everybody to meet everybody. Keep in mind some of the powers the kids have are stupid but I tried to get powers that kids wouldn't have. Enjoy or not.

Preface (Very stupid now that I reread it)
In the year 3112 a few adults had children that had super powers. I tracked them all down and they joined me in the battle of keeping the world alive. I tracked down the five children and they all have different powers. How do I know? I'm Physic and my name is Scott Bering.

Chapter...