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posted by coolie
. ‘’What happened to Sucky Sam?’’ Who knows,’’ replied Ted. They started walking through the catacombes.
We should get going ,”Bill. This place gives me the hibie Jeebeis,”said Death. You’re right,” replied Ted. They walked towards the front of the catacombes. For some strange reason, there was no hole to get out! They looked in the other direction. There was Sucky Sam standing about five yards away from them! Who, what, where, when…. Why,” said Bill. Looking for me,” said Sucky Sam in a cocky voice. All of the three were shocked in horror. Sucky Sam’s eyes turned bloodshot, his skin turned a pale green, his arms grew sharp spikes, and his ordinary teeth turned into sharp fangs. Run!” shouted Ted. They all shook with terror. There was no place to run. They were trapped. Hopelessly trapped. Sucky Sam charged at the 3 of them. Death, do you have your spear?” asked Bill quickly. Why?,” replied Death. No time for questions. Just give me the spear!” yelled Bill. Death handed his spear over to Bill. Bill stuck his spear out in front of him. The spear went right through Sucky Sam’s stomach. Oh nasty,” said Ted. Ted searched through his pocked. Hey, my magic magnet!” said Ted. He took out his magnet and attached it to the spear. His magnet shocked/ electrocuted Sucky Sam. The entrance of the catacombes magically opened! They all walked out of the catacombes with Sucky Sam lying on the ground with a spear in his stomach. How do we get home?” asked Death.
This is a persuasive essay I had to write for my English class, I posted a forum asking for opinions on addressing the reader. I know it's a dangerous thing to do, but I thought it would be okay to do here. Opinions are great, I would love to here anything you have to say. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, puncuation) please point them out so I can fix them, thanks:D



Do you remember that feeling you'd get on the last day of school? Remember how excited you'd be to finally get to do those summer things like ride bikes with your friends, stay up all night planning pranks, and...
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Multi-Verse Allie
Multi-Verse Allie
Summary: Allie Jonas life is miserable.
She live with only one parent. Her mother is always sick.
Her father is doing who knows what.
What happens when an angel appears and gives her second chance in life.
A chance to have both parents and be happy.
But there's only one little flaw in having the perfect life.
She knows the future. Is it a gift or a curse?
_____________________________________
"Allison Margret, get up. We're going to be late," Renee Jonas said from the kitchen.

Fifteen minutes later, a seventeen year old girl walked into the kitchen, wear a short sleeve t-shirt, hoodie, blue jeans,...
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posted by axemnas
Role playing or Rping as most of the community calls it. Almost everyone's done it one way or another whether they realize it or not. Remember those days when you'd pretend you were a movie character or a prince/princess or a pirate or whatever. You were role playing in a since. Now days when you hear the word role playing you probably think things like War Craft, Star Craft, Nights and Dragons, Toontown, etc..
Something you've probably never figured however, is rping in relation to writing. Writing, that's all rping basically is. It's just writing a collaborative story from different points...
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Chapter 1
The miracle
It was over I only wanted my father and I could no longer have him. Yet again he was seduced by some girl. I never got what she met my “she was taking him away from me.” But I knew it met that I was going to be alone. Once again. That is a truth I could not handle I’ve been alone most of my life I didn’t want to be anymore. I just got my father back and no he is leaving me for some broad. I didn’t want to face the facts so I jumped of the roof of my house. The pain was excruciating but only lasted for a second. I sure thought I was dead when I open my eyes and...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (2)

john and carrie went to the museum ,they tried to find anything that give them some information about room 780 but sadly they didn't find much
the keeper saw them ,he know that something bad happened to them
the keeper call them "hey ,you", john and carrie "you meant us "
the keeper "yea ,follow me"
john and carrie followed the keeper they have no idea where they're going
the keeper entered carrie and john to his room
john asked "what you want from us?"
the keeper "your friend died? "
carrie" how did you know that?"
the keeper "oh come on this museum is suck no one visiting it ,and you...
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posted by Insight357
I hate you

But I just can’t seem to break you

Do I want you here?

Do I want you gone?



Everyone says your such a tease

But not to me

Are you real?

Are you fake?



Do I need to be

With this drama queen

You spout lies

No truth to be found



Why am I still

Trying to see the good in you?

Is it worth it?

Should I listen to them?



They tell me to go

Before I’m a victim

Of you mighty undoing

I won’t fall



I’ve made a promise

Can I keep it?

Will I leave?

Will I remain?



Promises

Sins

They all appear

The same



Lies

Sentences

Preach the

Difference



I’m listening to you

I can’t break you

I’m falling now

No one to catch me



Do I leave now

That I’ve fallen

Are you worth my time?

Am I worth this pain?



God, help me choose

For this is not my decision

Any longer

I’ve put my faith in my despair



Now show me the answer

Tell me what to do

Do I stay

Or do I leave you?
posted by para-scence
"Alessandra, you have two minutes to get down here!" Dad shouted from downstairs. I quickly pulled on my ratty old converse, not bothering to tie them. I ran downstairs, probably just making it to the two minute mark. Dad folded his arms, probably upset that I'd made it in time.

"You're going to be late," he said. "You'd better get your ass out of here." I grabbed my bag off the chair, and grabbed a candy bar from the pantry. Just as I got out the door, he grabbed a fistful of my hair, yanking it back. I yelped as my head jerked backwards, and I fell back into the house.

"Go say goodbye to your...
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posted by ambers1999
Ring, ring. “Hello”? ”Hannah I need you to come to my lab today”! “Doc”? but I thought”
…” I know, I’ve been working on something and I need your help”. “OK nice to talk to you again…bye”. In excitement I jumped out of my chair and put my best clothes on. Wondering what Doc was up to? I haven’t seen him in over a year, now that it’s the summer I finally have something to do. I raced down to Doc’s lab. The door creaked as I opened then I knew I was at the right place! “Hello” I said softly, “anyone here”? “Ah here you are I haven’t seen you in awhile...
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Of course, unlucky as she was, Lara Binks, reporter for the "Sunnydale News, got caught in a rainstorm.
And, since getting stuck in a rainstorm wasn't bad enough, it also happened when she was stuck on a rather revolting public bus, which had lint and dead bugs littering the stained carpet and torn chairs.
If that wasn't bad enough, she and the odd-looking passengers were travelling across a dirt road in the middle of nowhere.
Worse yet, Lara had to get a story into the office in three days, and there was no longer any way this was possible, since the bus driver had announced they were stopping...
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chapter 3
the party

the bell chimed and we all lead out of the hall, me and becca linked arms as we walked down and i thought to myself after the first day, i had some friends i was on the cheerleading team,and i had a party to go to tonight. i was acturally really exsited.
i didn't realise how much i was thinking and how much time passed, until i ralised that becca was now talking to tom liam and danny were play fighting and jake was looking down.
"whats up?" i asked quietly just incase.
"i was just thinking " i kept silent to give him time to tell me if he wanted to "i never believed in something...
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posted by serenacullen93
My world changed the day my mom died as I’m in my fathers plane or our company plane that he owns. I remember the day I was in the waiting room that the wreak had killed her . I remember stand on the cliff overlooking the ocean hoping that I would wake up to fide that it had all been a dream.
The metal had not cut though my mother flesh that her blood was not stain of the road. It was my fault I had been the one that had been at the party I should not have.     
    I pulled my headphones out of my ears as the plane touch down my father was standing...
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Hope you enjoy! :)
Annabeth Chase and the Olympians

One
We Find Two Idiots


Ok, let’s get to the point. My name is Annabeth Chase and I’m a half-blood…Or…..A demigod. I know, I know you think there’s no such thing. Most mortals do. Anyway, I’m a daughter of Athena-goddess of wisdom, war, and crafts.
I was sitting in the Big House talking with Chiron, Camp Half-Blood‘s activities director. “ I really think we should have a temple, Chiron. And I should design it. I mean the kids here are the children of the gods! And we don’t even have a monument for them!”
He gave me a tired...
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As Marley was at home, he was doing research about vampires but still nothing about vampires losing their short term memory loss ability. It is hard to get facts about vampires without running into a movie, T.V series or book. “What’s this?” Said Marley. “Vampires from the Hunters Eyes”. As Marley looked through the website a lot of the facts were true like the side effects, half-bloods and pure-bloods. Then he saw just what he was looking for, as he read he understood. “Half-bloods are hated throughout the line of pure-bloods but are used as slaves or grunts. Those who are bitten...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
(a/n:Rate and message me if you like it!)



Another day at another life, I thought to myself as I walked home. I won’t go all emo about it and tell you my life sucks, because to you it would most likely be heaven. My family is rich, I am in the popular group every girl in my school is obsessed with my brother. Everything about me is picture perfect, my looks. I have wavy blonde hair to die for; my eyes were very light green almost yellow. I was slender I had always been. And to top it all I have a jock boyfriend, I know how cliché. I let out a deep sigh once I looked at the clock, it was nearly...
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posted by khfan12
Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, you three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" said Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" said Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and Ray Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" Said Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the top of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" said Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could...
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added by shubz10
posted by Rae-Ash
You’re the reason why
I have to lie
Why I hurt so much
That my heart’s in a clutch

I’m slowly dying
‘Cause of your lying
You used to be my magic
But now you’re a dick

You made me long to be
Everything that wasn’t Lee
But look where that got me
Locked in without a key

If only you knew
That I plummeted deeper than blue
But then again
You’re just another two timing has been

You ran away
Thinking it’d be okay
But you were wrong
More so than any love song

You made me want to sing
With you following
But look at how wrong I was
Believing you that it was just “buzz”

Now you’re the reason why
I cannot do anything but cry
I woke up. The director came in and yelled at me to get out of bed. I sighed. I knew, this was, another day in showbiz. Showbiz was, at first, a very interesting and exciting activity to take on. It was much more serious than I thought it would be, and a lot less fun. I was Syria, the main protagonist in the story. My real name is Stace, for those of you who don't know. I could be a trouble-maker in the play, but I couldn't be rambunctious and cause trouble for the crew.
People confused me most of the time. Especially adults. I could be trouble-making in the play, but I couldn't be rambunctious...
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Mica and Amanda walked out of Maya's house, followed by Maya herself. The air was crisp, not a cloud in the sky, and the sun beat down on their heads. Day birds sang their songs. Male and female Cardinals caring for their young. Their bikes were stationed at the end of the culdasack. They all jumped on their Seastar bikes and rode down to the Castle where Hannah and Jett live. Amanda ran up to the door, followed by Mica and Maya. She knocked the door 3 times and Hannah and Jett's butler walked up to the door and answered it.

"Yes?" He asked looking firm and tall. "State your buisness Miss Amanda,...
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posted by Insight357
I stood at his grave. The people had finally cleared out. Now it was only me and him. I bit my lip, there would be no more tears. He didn’t want that. I sat down, and went into the depths of my mind.

I still remember the last kiss we shared. We had been in the forest on the far side of town. He pinned me against a tree, and crashed his lips to mine. Our lips moved so perfectly together. My tongue flicked out and ran along his bottom lip. His mouth dropped open and I eagerly entered.

He had been the dominate one in the relationship, no question about it. But sometimes, he liked to see me take...
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